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Georgia I like the way you have attempted to use the poetic device or language feature of a simile in your short sensory recount. Next time I would like to you to edit your work better before posting it in your blog. You have made several errors which I have highlighted in red. Well done!
My reflection on my work:I put myself at multistructural stage because I can use two of my senses to describe what I saw and smelt while in the Sensory Garden.My next step is to use another language feature like alliteration or personification in my next piece of work.
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Georgia I like the way you have attempted to use the poetic device or language feature of a simile in your short sensory recount.
Next time I would like to you to edit your work better before posting it in your blog. You have made several errors which I have highlighted in red.
Well done!
My reflection on my work:
I put myself at multistructural stage because I can use two of my senses to describe what I saw and smelt while in the Sensory Garden.
My next step is to use another language feature like alliteration or personification in my next piece of work.
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